In a mystical dream the other night
I stood before a mesmerizing sight
Maidens of beauty of different tones
Laid on stairs of ancient stones
Covered in rays of golden silk
Skin as soft as honey and milk
Pearls made of magic and light
Hang between breasts fully ripe
Amber and musk filled the air
Scent of lust to those who dare
Dazzled I was in my dream
Around me felt incredibly real
A shiver ran across my spine
As I felt a hand touching mine
A calming voice whispered to me
“Come along I’ll make you see”
” A place where few of men have stepped”
“A love divine you’ve never felt”
“Surrender your soul just for tonight”
“And I Promise you heaven at the temple of Aphrodite”
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breath taking….
love the imagery, wise words.
Happy Rally.
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Thanks as always Jingle…:-)
woooot! lust it er love it! 🙂
Thank you Spoon…
NICE! I loved the imagery, the pic complements it so well! I really really loved this piece!
Thank you Luna…welcome to my blog.
truely mesmerizing story… i love the ending:
“Surrender your soul just for tonight”
“And I Promise you heaven at the temple of Aphrodite”
sigh…
Glad you enjoyed it…:-)
Beautiful, poem and image both!
Thanks Ina…
Cool… this is just so breath-taking.. 🙂 🙂
Here is mine for this week Rally.. Hope to see you.. http://www.tingtasy.com/2011/03/collections-of-tings-poetry-tpmar101.html
They do sound enticing, seductive…
Thank you Kim…as always….:-)
loved the imagery. thank you.
Bet you can’t surrender your soul for just one night! You made the temple too enticing for one night. At some point you’ll have to give up lust to find love.
Beautiful poem!
Love is always the quest Dan…Thanks for your comment as usual…:-)
this is one hot poem. a hot and wet dream hehe. two thumbs up!
Thank you Julian, welcome to my blog.
Excellent poem. This temple sounds like it’s worth checking out.
Beautiful.
Thanks for sharing.
Lusty poem. Well done, Sam! Ditto, Dan …
Always a pleasure hearing your comments Jamie…
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nice dream, well put 🙂
think i better surrender sam haha! and then more poems shall flow after that.. my wk 39 is here.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2009/11/17/regret/
I did as well Five…hahahaha..
Great poem here,
Nicely crafted
Thanks for your visit, and welcome to my blog.
Scent of lust to those who dare …
Where’s the temple for girls? 🙂
I really liked this, very sensual …
Every one can find his/her temple…:-) thank you as usual Blaga…
I always enjoy coming here…so peaceful and enchanting…this piece is just lovely, beautiful. Your page/work often soothes my soul when I visit, thank you 🙂
Happy rally!!!
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Your always welcomed Lynn…
So did you have the courage to go? How come I never have intersting dreams like this one? But I enjoyed your poem and look forward to the one that tells what happened when you accepted the invitation. By the way, was this a dream or fantasy? 🙂
hugs, pat
Hi Pat,
For your question it was One full cup of dream, half a cup of fantasy and one full spoon of reality…:-)…hugs..
Lust. Love. Either way, well done, I enjoyed reading!
Fun read. I’m impressed with the rhythm and rhyme all the while weaving imagery.
Thank you Debi…welcome to my blog.
wow.. this flowed like a silken stream 🙂 rhyme and wordplay.. and thought behind it too. a terrific, dream poem!
Thanks Leo appreciate your comments.
nice, sensual scenery, great images, brilliant.
Thank you Dag…welcome to my blog.
Wow! Great Words
This seemed more real than a dream!
Nice one buddy..:D
Thanks Raghu…
Wow, a very sensual mystical piece of poetry. Truly beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for your kind words Yelena.
Man.. with imagery like this, which lady wouldn’t want to hear it for self..?
Very well writ Sam.. so dreamy!
Mesmerizing words Dear.. 🙂
Hugs xx
Lovely poem 🙂 I’ve always loved this painting.
You wouldn’t happen to know who painted it, would you?
so shall those that seek love truly find it….lovely
You manage to blend very nicely the magic, fantastical quality of myth with the physicality of this sensual scene. Good work. The rhythm and rhyme work quite well to carry the building tension of the story.
You can find my Rally entry at:
http://elainedanforth.wordpress.com/2012/08/02/light-was-not-always/
Happy Rally!